Hello friends,
Let's deal with today's planning.
To begin with, let's focus on the reading part. Start with reading online The Times U.K newspaper for twenty five minutes.
It's ten past eight now... :) What a wonderful day is today... :)) By the way, I am listening Anno 1602 OST musics from YouTube... It's very enjoyable... :)
I think for today, if I am preparing the Toefl exam, then I should write and think in English... The music is really beautiful also... I was always playing this game when I was a kid... :) It was a great ship merchanting game... And the musics are so marvellous still of the game... :)))
It's very nice to write in English, but also, it's very good effort to read in English, I mean, I should start studying Emglish, after I will make my coffee today... First of all, I have to get relaxed, then I should dive into reaading The Times U.K... I am also wondering what will happen today's topic.... :)) There are of course a lot of different article in The Times magazine... I ought to choose a nice and suitable one... I am considering that my English is not so bad, nevertheless it's going better all the time I hope... :)))
Let's check it out, what are the mistakes of this writing passage of my own...
I love you guys and girls, what a positive day is today... :))
CORRECTED VERSION:
Hello friends,
Let's deal with today's plan.
To begin with, let's focus on the reading part. Let's start by reading The Times UK newspaper online for twenty-five minutes.
It's ten past eight now... :) What a wonderful day it is today! :)) By the way, I am listening to the Anno 1602 OST on YouTube... It's very enjoyable... :)
I think that today, since I am preparing for the TOEFL exam, I should write and think in English... The music is really beautiful too... I used to play this game all the time when I was a kid... :) It was a great merchant shipping game... And the music is still so marvelous... :)))
It's very nice to write in English, but it's also a very good way to practice reading in English. I mean, I should start studying English after I make my coffee today... First of all, I have to relax, and then I should dive into reading The Times UK. I am also wondering what today's topic will be... :)) There are, of course, a lot of different articles in The Times. I ought to choose a nice and suitable one... I think that my English is not so bad. Nevertheless, it's getting better all the time, I hope... :)))
Let's check it out: what are the mistakes in this piece of writing that I wrote myself?
I love you guys and girls. What a positive day it is today... :))
SCORED: 17 out of 30
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By the way, guys, the writing piece which I wrote above is scored 17 over 30... I should increase it to 23 or 24 or even much better... :)) The artificial intelligence evaluated the writing passage which I wrote above for only 17 points... I should never stop writing I think, because I got really stucked in the writing part of the Toefl exam. Build a sentence part was really difficult for me... :)) It was a total disaster for me in that part of the exam... :) I couldn't answer to all the questions in that part, even maybe only the half of them were answered by myself in the exam... :))) I should really study hard and keep practicing all the day from the morning to the night I think... :) The AI made me a four and a half hours studying plan for every day since the exam begins... There is a plan for 80 days as I mentioned before in Turkish... The first day, the headline was starting with Turkish language and continueing in English and today I changed my mind and thought that If I am studying English, then why should I keep writing my sentences in English also... :))) That's a very clever approach I think... :)) We should be clever to success in English and also in so many things in life, I mean not only for studying English, it's always valid for almost everthing to become much more clever always works.... :)))
Ok guys. Let's check it out: what I got in the last passage? Let's copy this part to the AI, and see what the mistakes are... :))
POLISHED VERSION:
By the way, guys, the writing piece that I wrote above was scored 17 out of 30... I should increase my score to 23 or 24, or even much higher... :))
The artificial intelligence evaluated the writing passage that I wrote above at only 17 points... I should never stop writing, I think, because I got really stuck on the writing part of the TOEFL exam. The "Build a Sentence" section was really difficult for me... :)) It was a total disaster for me in that part of the exam... :) I couldn't answer all the questions in that section. In fact, I may have answered only half of them in the exam... :)))
I should really study hard and keep practicing all day, from morning until night, I think... :) The AI made me a four-and-a-half-hour study plan for every day for the next 80 days, as I mentioned before in Turkish...
On the first day, the heading started in Turkish and continued in English. Today, I changed my mind and thought, "If I am studying English, then why should I keep writing my sentences in Turkish as well?" :)))
That's a very clever approach, I think... :)) We should be clever to succeed in English and also in so many other things in life. I mean, it's not only useful for studying English; being smarter and constantly trying to improve is always valuable in almost everything we do... :)))
Okay, guys. Let's check it out: what did I get in the last passage? Let's copy this part into the AI and see what the mistakes are... :))
SCORED: 18 out of 30
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Guys, I have already made my coffee and enjoying the beautiful music of Barış Manço's which is "Can Bedenden Çıkmayınca". A very nice Turkish song, a real classic of Turkish pop... :))) Coffee is also very delicious... :))
Without wasting too much time, let's dive into the reading article of The Times U.K.
I have already read the article on The Times Magazine... :) It was about asylums and on the news it was reported that only one in hundred asylum claims are genuine... :) Actually, the frauders are everywhere, we are not surprised but they have lived some bad days during this asylum process, we think... :) The process was really though I think... :)
Let's drink out coffe a little bit, also... :))
We have already read the article and wrote the unknown vocabulary to my computer... :) I think hard-working is paying-off all the time... :)
Finally, let's ask to the AI that what it will score us... :) I am wondering about the last part's score... :)
CORRECTED VERSION:
Guys, I have already made my coffee and am enjoying the beautiful music of Barış Manço, which is "Can Bedenden Çıkmayınca." It's a very nice Turkish song, a real classic of Turkish pop music... :))) The coffee is also very delicious... :))
Without wasting too much time, let's dive into the reading article from The Times UK.
I have already read the article in The Times... :) It was about asylum seekers, and the news reported that only one in a hundred asylum claims is genuine... :) Actually, fraudsters are everywhere. We're not surprised, but they have had some difficult days during the asylum process, we think... :) The process was really tough, I think... :)
Let's drink our coffee a little bit more, too... :))
We have already read the article and written the unfamiliar vocabulary down on my computer... :) I think hard work pays off all the time... :)
Finally, let's ask the AI what score it will give us... :) I am wondering about the score for the last part... :)
SCORED: 18 out of 30
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To begin with, my next writing part is starting now. In the previos parts of my writings which I wrote above were not so bad, but still there should be much more progressing... :) I am making some kinds of mistakes all the time... I ought to deal with those mistakes. I should keep practicing and improve my English while the time is passing away.
Moreover, today we are going to Bursa to my sister's home and see my niece, my brother-in-law also. I cannot study while my father is driving, but after a while, I am sure that I will keep practicing all day long in Bursa. I just made the reading section of my study and also only done the first part of the reading section which was reading The Times.
Furthermore, I should focus on my writings much better and always should control the reading passages before I submit it. Not only the writing sections, but also it is very significant that whole parts have so many importances... I should get 4.5 or higher from the whole sections of the TOEFL exam. In my first exam, unfortunately I failed. But we should not make our morals worser because of this failure. On contrast, we have to keep us improving efficiently.
All in all, today we should move on and reach to my sister's home and begin studying in an effective manner. We may look from the positive side and see that there is still 79 days to study and achieve our goals.
In conclusion, I got some news from the elder one, I might will pass this TOEFL exam if I kept my promise ahead and if I study hard. Hard work pays off all the times, without frusturating, just keep pushing us further... :)
CORRECTED VERSION:
To begin with, my next writing session is starting now. The previous parts of my writing that I wrote above were not so bad, but there is still a lot of room for improvement... :) I keep making the same kinds of mistakes all the time... I ought to deal with those mistakes. I should keep practicing and improving my English as time passes.
Moreover, today we are going to Bursa to my sister's home to see my niece and my brother-in-law as well. I cannot study while my father is driving, but after a while, I am sure that I will keep practicing all day long in Bursa. I have just completed the reading section of my study, and I have also only done the first part of the reading section, which was reading The Times.
Furthermore, I should focus much more carefully on my writing and always check my writing before I submit it. Not only the writing section, but all the sections are very important as well. I should get 4.5 or higher in all sections of the TOEFL exam. Unfortunately, I failed my first exam. But we should not let this failure lower our morale. On the contrary, we have to keep improving ourselves efficiently.
All in all, today we should move on, reach my sister's home, and begin studying effectively. We should look at the positive side and realize that there are still 79 days to study and achieve our goals.
In conclusion, I got some news from the elder one. I might pass this TOEFL exam if I keep the promise I made and study hard. Hard work always pays off. Without getting frustrated, we just have to keep pushing ourselves forward... :)
SCORED: 19 out of 30
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